Incorrect sentences (Run-ons and comma splices)

Run-ons

1) Love cannot be defined in a couple sentences love also cannot be defined by just one person. 

2) The artist is desperate craving serious and relentless when he says "The whole time on my mind is how much I'm gonna get to make you feel so good like you know I could."

3)Next the author does a nice job of having a broad topic that is studio relevant to the world today.

4) "During the two years spent researching this book I ate an enormous amount of fast food."

5) When someone is trying to convince their reader that their argument is valid they need to make sure they have a large audience they are referring to.

6)"Fast food and its consequences have become inescapable regardless of whether you eat it twice a day try to avoid It or have never taken a single bite."

7) Sometimes it's really hard to get started on a writing assignment paper article or even book. 

8) You may feel like giving up and accepting your fate but the self pity phase will end.

9) Don't think about people judging your work don't think about trying to write to please others.

10) The song "So Beautiful" is a classic R&B hit it was released in 2009

Comma splices

1) Take music for example, there are various types of love songs, but each song has a different feeling. 

2) Accept the fact that you will never sit down and write good the first try, everything could use a little improvement so just write until you find yourself in your writing and remember that it is just the shitty first draft. 

3) "What We Eat" was written thirteen years ago, it is still something most people can relate to. 

4) The body of the paper was informative, beach paragraph had a reason for being written.

5) Each paragraph went into depth, the conclusion paragraph was simple and eye opening.

6) Usually papers that are listed with a bunch of facts are boring, Schlosser finds a way to share his knowledge in an interesting way. 

7) Botg of these songs have a very realistic view of love, "So Beautiful" has the more realistic connotation.

8) He thinks about her all the time, he wants the woman to know how beautiful he finds her. 

9) The artist wants to spend the rest of his life with this woman, he has no idea if she feels the same way or not.

10) The similarities between the two songs are both artists are emotional about the subject, neither of them know how the opposite sex feels about them.